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Creating Your Own Short Story

This text includes information and tasks meant to spark your creativity, and help you see that writing well does not primarily depend on talent but on putting thought and work into your writing. It will also give you some insight into how authors work to create characters and build a story.

Blue butterfly sits on a pile of books. — Writing your own fiction allows you to create your own worlds. Bilde: John Voo / CC BY 4.0

Peer feedback

As you work your way through this text, you will encounter a number of tasks. Work on the tasks by yourself before you share your work in a group.

It is easiest to keep going back to the same group each time. This will also help you see how your own writing and the work of your fellow students develop.

Give each other supportive, positive feedback. You may for example point out two things that you really liked and make one suggestion for improvement.

If you need tips on how to give good peer feedback you can watch this video from the Odyssey Learning Project on YouTube: Link to film: "What it Means to be a Peer Reviewer".

Photo: Three girls are talking and working together. Each girl has a computer. — In this project, peer feedback is important. Bilde: Fundament / CC BY-SA 4.0

Word limit

Writing short stories depends on being able to say as much as possible with as few words as possible. It is said that Ernest Hemingway once, to win a bet, wrote a short story that was just 6 words long. Read the 6 word short story below. Do you agree that this qualifies as a short story?

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Task 1. 50 word limit:

In this task the challenge is to be able to create a story when you have very few words at your disposal.

Write a story about yourself in 50 words or less.
Make sure it is a story; something must happen in the text.
Do not exceed the 50-word limit.

When you have finished writing, share your text in a group. Give each other feedback that highlights what was good about the story.

Example of short story written with a 50 word limit:

Mother

Born. Strong willed. Aged 5 hurled clogs through a glass door, because I wouldn’t bend. My mother swept up the glass and sighed. We never escaped that sigh.

Yesterday at the home, she threw her teacup at the nurse. It shattered in perfect pieces. Perhaps there is still time.

Japanese procelain cup without handle. Broken. — Bilde: Matt Reinbold / CC BY-SA 4.0

Characterisation

Characterisation is the way an author brings a character to life. This can be done through direct characterisation, where the author describes the character: what do they look like, what do they wear, what is their personality like, and so on. It can also be done through indirect characterisation: describing things the character says or does that reveal something about them.

He was the sort of person who stood on mountaintops during thunderstorms in wet copper armour shouting "All the Gods are bastards".

Sir Terry Pratchett, The Colour of Magic.

Task 2. Using imagery to describe a character:

Think of a character, and use imagery to describe them. You can for example use a simile or a metaphor. (If you have trouble thinking of a character you can use imagery to describe someone you know.)

When you have made the description share it in the group. What do the group members think your character is like, based on your description?

What is the difference between a metaphor and a simile?

A metaphor is when you compare one thing with another without using comparison words.

My girlfriend is sunshine and rain.
My grandmother is a crabapple, withered and bitter.

A simile is when you compare one thing with another using comparison words.

Your smile is like coming in from the freezing cold to a room with a log fire burning.
He is as brave as 100 men.

Task 3. Picture the person:

Think about the person you wrote about in Task 2: What is the person wearing? What do they carry in their pockets?

Make a list.
Look at what you have listed: What do the items say about the person?
Share your list with your group. What do they think the items say about the person?

Picture of a hand drawing in a notebook, drawing an outline around a boy who sits up on the page of the notebook. There are toy cars on the desk. — Try to picture your characters clearly before you write the story. Bilde: Joshua Siniscal / CC BY-SA 4.0

Setting

The setting is where and when a story takes place.

The setting can encompass a time of year, a time of day, a certain century, it can be in England, in a house, in a room, etc.

If you are able to describe a realistic setting, it will help the readers picture the story in their minds.

Task 4. Explore setting:

Use the character you have written about in task 2 and 3, and place them in a setting that would be surprising or strange to them.
(The last place you’d expect to meet the person / an unlikely situation for them to be in.)

Write a few paragraphs about what happens to the person in this setting.

Share what you have written with your group and explain why the situation would be unusual for the character. Give and get feedback.

People walking on a bridge, St. Paul's Cathedral in the background. — Will your story have a rural or an urban setting? Bilde: Tone Hesjedal / CC BY 4.0

Describing sounds, smells, and touch

Being able to create mood and atmosphere in the story is important. One way to do this is to describe sounds and smells, or to describe how something feels to touch. Engaging the readers' senses draws on both memory and imagination and makes the setting and situations you describe seem more real.

She has come to believe the homes of sad or hateful people smell different. When people have sadness or hate inside them, it comes out in a miasma. Dr. Hammond’s house smells like a form of slow poison has been hanging in the air for years. She has a sudden conviction that if she lifted all the furniture in his house she would find layers of squished black bugs underneath
Rene Denfeld, The Enchanted.

Task 5. Smell, sound and touch:

If you want to give your readers the feeling that they can smell, hear, and/or touch the things listed below, how would you describe them? Be creative, and don't shy away from using imagery.

sleeping in freshly laundered sheets
dogs barking
spring morning
lion's cage at the zoo
being by the ocean
a marching band practicing
entering a pizza bakery when you are very hungry

Share what you have written in groups. Did any of the descriptions surprise you? Give and get feedback.

Cherry tree in bloom, the sky above is blue. — Description is important for the reader to get a full experience: What do you smell? What can you touch? What do you hear? How do you feel? Bilde: Tone Hesjedal / CC BY 4.0

Conflict

Usually, when we talk about conflict, we think of people having an argument or a fight. In literature, the conflict is an obstacle to be overcome and the thing that sets events in motion and carries the action forwards. For example, in Jane Austen's novels the conflict can be a woman's desire to marry well.

It is common to divide conflict into six main types in literature:

A character having a conflict with themselves. This is a story where the main character must overcome something within themselves in order for the story to be resolved.
Two or more characters having a conflict with each other. This is easy to understand. Two or more characters want different things and come into conflict with each other because of that.
Character against nature. This is where a character comes into conflict with a natural phenomenon, wild animals, storms, rough terrain and so on.
Character against the supernatural. Many interesting and fun stories are set in the realm of fantasy, where the character may battle ghouls and ghosts, wizards or trolls.
Character against technology. This is especially common in science fiction, but other stories may also describe how a character comes into conflict with new technology.
Character against society. It can be hard to fit in, and many stories centre around characters who are outsiders in the world they live in.

Task 6. Create a conflict:

Think about a conflict that your character may have. Write a simple timeline for how you would like the conflict to play out and be resolved. It is also possible to have an unresolved conflict, by having an open ending.

Photo: Steep mountain side, man standing at the bottom, blue sky above. — What kind of conflict is illustrated here? Bilde: Bjørn Frostad / CC BY-NC 4.0

Planning a short story

Sometimes a story just comes to us, but a lot of the time we will have to plan it out. There are several ways to plan out a story. You can make a mind map where you write down key words about conflict, setting, characters, etc. Another option is to start with an idea, put pen to paper, and see where your writing takes you – and when you have gotten a rough idea, add key words to how you see it progressing and ending.

Task 7. Make plans for two short stories:

From the list of titles, pick two and make a plan for how you would write each story. Think about characters, setting, and conflict. You may use a mind map, or just write down key words.

Vitamins
How to Talk to Your Mother
Small Good Things
Cathedral
Feathers
Lost in the Middle of Everywhere
Boxes
The Impossible Escape
Keep the Home Fires Burning

Share your writing in your group, and give and receive help to improve your plans. Think about what will make the stories as interesting as possible.

Photo of a large stone building with two towers. A large moon penetrates a grey sky. The building is a former asylum in Buffalo, New Jersey. There is writing in a corner of the photo: "Setting, 19th century asylum turned into apartment building". — It is a good idea to make a plan for your short story before you write. Bilde: Onasill Bill / CC BY-NC-SA 4.0

Writing a short story

As any author will tell you, the only way to become a writer is to write. When it comes to writing fiction, practice is unlikely to ever make perfect, as readers will have different opinions of your work no matter how well you write. But practice will make you better. If you feel you have no imagination, you can draw inspiration from real life. If you feel you have a lot of imagination, set it free and see where it takes you.

Task 8. Write a short story:

Choose one of the two stories you planned and write the story in full. Share what you have written in the group, and get suggestions for improvements before you hand it in.

Example of a short story

VITAMINS

My mother has packed and is ready to leave. My university bedsit is not really big enough for guests. The linoleum floor gleams.

She walks in from the kitchen shaking a bottle: – Are you taking these? I stare at her blankly. – Vitamin C is important, you know. She slams the bottle down in front of me on the table. – I’ll get you a glass of water. She busies back to the kitchen.

I stare at the bottle: a bright orange, like a sun, on the label. She comes back, hands me a glass of water, which splashes. Cool drops hit the back of my hand, slightly soaking the bandage around my wrist. It gives me a sudden shiver. I put the glass on the table. – Don’t, it will leave a ring! She picks it up and hands it to me again, then opens the bottle and pours out two pills.

– Take them now! I take them. A chemically blurred taste of oranges is briefly in my mouth. She nods and takes the glass and bottle away.

I sit on the hard bed and stare at the window. She has polished it inside and out. Freshly laundered and ironed, the curtains seem stiff and hard. I see flecks of blue sky breaking through heavy clouds.

You have to take the vitamins every day, she insists, peering at me from the doorway. I nod. It is not about the vitamins. – Do you promise? I nod again. Suddenly shrill, she says: – Please say it out loud! I look at her and say: – I promise.

She seems small to me – ancient, brittle, and tiny. She gives me a weak smile and says: – Oh well, I suppose I’d better go. – Yes, I reply, – have a safe journey! I do not make eye contact.

She suddenly embraces me clumsily, then turns and puts on her coat and shoes. – Bye, then! Her voice is full of hollow cheerfulness. – Bye.

I go to the window and watch her walk down the path to the street: an old woman, a wheeled suitcase bouncing behind her. I think about when I was little, holding on to her hand, trying to keep up with her grown-up steps.

She has left the bottle of vitamins on the workbench in the kitchen. In the tiny bathroom, where the shower is inches from the toilet, she has scoured everything, from floor to ceiling. It shines like it is brand new.

Assessing a short story:

It can be difficult to assess short stories because our enjoyment of them will in part be a result of personal preferences. In the expandable box below, we point out some elements you may consider when assessing a classmate’s short story, or when you are revising your own.

Assessing a short story

Content and structure:

Setting: Is it clear where the story takes place? Is the time and place described in a way that helps you understand where the action is taking place? Are you given enough information to picture that place clearly in your mind?

Conflict: Does the story have a conflict that drives the action? Do the events in the story seem logical in relation to the conflict?

Characters: Do we picture the characters clearly? Are we told what they are like, or do we understand what they are like from what they say, do, wear, or have?

Dialogue: Is direct speech used in the text? Do the conversations seem realistic?

Ending: Does the action build naturally towards the ending, or is the ending unconnected with the story? (For example, if the main character is unexpectedly killed in an accident). It is common to have an unexpected twist at the end of a short story, but the ending should not be disconnected from the action of the story.

Language:

Vocabulary: Is the language varied and without repetitions? Are descriptive words and phrases used throughout the text?

Literary devices: Is imagery used in the text? Metaphors, similes, symbols etc. Are they used in a way that enhances the story, or do they seem added on and distracting?

Efficiency: A short story tries to say as much as possible with as few words as possible. Is the language used efficiently in the story, or are there passages that could be cut without it making a difference to the telling of the story?

Grammar: Are verb tenses used correctly in relation to the chronology of the story? (Past / present / future?)