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Run-On Sentences, Comma Splices, and Sentence Fragments

Sometimes, grammar errors can get in the way of the clarity of your writing and distract readers from your ideas. Three such errors are run-on sentences, comma splices, and fragment sentences. Luckily, these mistakes are both easy to spot and easy to fix.
A magnifying glass highlighting the word "grammar".

Find the mistakes in the following text:

If you think punctuation isn’t worth learning you should think again without punctuation English is very difficult to comprehend. Punctuation is used to convey and clarify the meaning of written language, it allows you to present your message in a logical way. Important to remember.

This text demonstrates why you should pay attention to punctuation and good sentence structure. You probably understood the meaning of the text, but without proper punctuation and complete sentences it becomes cumbersome to read. The text contains three types of grammar errors that you should try to avoid in your writing: run-on sentences, comma splices, and sentence fragments.

Run-on sentences

Run-on sentences occur when two or more are connected improperly. The first sentence in the example text above, is a run-on sentence. This sentence is actually two independent sentences with two separate ideas that both make sense on their own.

Incorrect:
If you think punctuation isn’t worth learning you should think again without punctuation English is very difficult to comprehend.

1. Independent sentence:
If you think punctuation isn’t worth learning, you should think again.

2. Independent sentence:
Without punctuation English is very difficult to comprehend.

Comma splices

A mistake closely related to run-on sentences, is comma splices. In this case, two or more independent clauses are joined by just a comma and no The comma isn't strong enough to hold together two independent clauses by itself; it needs the help of a semi-colon, a full stop, or a conjunction.

The second sentence in the example text has a comma splice. Once more, we have two independent sentences; each of them is complete on its own.

Incorrect:
Punctuation is used to convey and clarify the meaning of written language, it allows you to present your message in a logical way.

1. Independent sentence:
Punctuation is used to convey and clarify the meaning of written language.

2. Independent sentence:
It allows you to present your message in a logical way.

How to fix run-on sentences and comma splices

Both run-on sentences and comma splices can be easily fixed. You could add a full stop, a semi-colon, or a coordinating conjunction. For example:

Incorrect: The flowers are beautiful they brighten the room.

  • Correct: The flowers are beautiful. They brighten the room. (full stop)

  • Correct: The flowers are beautiful; they brighten the room. (semi-colon)

  • Correct: The flowers are beautiful, and they brighten the room. (comma + conjunction)

  • Correct: The flowers are beautiful because they brighten the room. (conjunction)

Sentence fragments

The final sentence in the example text is what we call a sentence fragment: 'Important to remember'.

A complete sentence contains a subject and a verb and expresses a complete thought. If any of these three are missing, you are dealing with a sentence fragment. A sentence fragment is a string of words that looks like a sentence, but actually isn’t a complete sentence. Fragments are very common in conversation and spoken English is full of them. But if you write the way you think, you will transfer fragment sentences into your written English. They do not belong in essays and other formal writing.

Here are a three examples, including a description of how you can fix them:

Missing a subject:
Incorrect:
I'm exhausted. Was running late for class.
Correct: I'm exhausted. I was as running late for class.
(insert the correct subject)

Missing a verb:
Incorrect:
Technology the way we communicate.
Correct: Technology dictates / changes / affects the way we communicate.
(insert the correct verb)

Missing a complete thought:
Incorrect:
The university offers many interesting subjects. Such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
Correct: The university offers many interesting subjects, such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
(use a comma instead of a full stop)

Are sentence fragments always bad? No, they are not. You want to avoid sentence fragments in formal writing, but they are frequently and intentionally used in the media and by fiction authors to make the text more conversational or snappy.

A word of advice:

These mistakes are quite easy to fix. The best way to detect them is to read the text aloud before you hand it in. Reading aloud to yourself is by far the best way to discover how your writing actually sounds to other people. You will often notice if the sentence is illogical and missing a bit, or if it sounds awkward and clunky. Commas and full stops give you a chance to breathe; if you find that you're out of breath while reading, there is probably something wrong with the punctuation. So make a habit of listening to your own voice as you write; it is often the best adviser you have at hand.


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Sist faglig oppdatert 01.03.2022

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